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It's really good, but you should really check for balance of syllables in each group of sentences, it makes it more lyrical. Otherwise it's really good.

Virgilcomic responds:

I'm not a very experienced poem writer. :-p Thanks for the suggestion, as it should help me improve my bizarre sense of rhythm.

Ace Action Jackson

Excellent. Nice art!

Wedge1024 responds:

Thank you. If you haven't seen it, I did my best to stay true to the art of the TV Show Clerks. Great show, check it out.

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That hurt my ears.

BabySSRer responds:

I Love you too.

Why

This is so bad, that I'm tasting metal and seeing spots. I think I've had a stroke.

Sepht23 responds:

Just snicker at the end and give it a 2

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